Advantages and disadvantages of the tourism
Nowadays, every summers, a lot of people travel to another countries, cities, villages,... They receive the name of tourists, but which are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
It's clear that the tourism is good for hotels and restaurants because the mayority of his earnigs are in holiday's time. In addiction, if this travelers enjoy with their experience, they will recomended it to their friends. Also it`s serves for save forgotten villages from the field of dissappear.
On the other hand, the touist fill of rubbish the zones where they pass (not all of them), how for example in the beach, where they throw away food wrappers. However they produce acoustic pollution.
In conclusion, the tourism is good for the people and hotels and catering business, but is bad for the environment.
every summers ---every summer
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villages,... They --- Punctuation
the tourism --- tourism
the mayority of his earnigs are in holiday's time
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this travelers --- these travellers
they will recomended --- they will recommend
Also it`s serves
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